PartlySunny Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Code Blue Always springing forth This smattering of tears Afraid to face the hours And weeks and months and years Echoing so empty Without the sound of you No colors in my world - My rainbow's gone code blue Link to comment
Hasie Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Hey this avatar looks familiar... does anyone else use it? Or have you recently transferred accounts? Ok lol apart from my distraction... woah this poem is riddled. Needs some thinking to crack it! Always springing forth This smattering of tears Hmm seems to be maybe the tears is code blue... Afraid to face the hours And weeks and months and years But tears aren't afraid to face time, pain is and remorse... Echoing so empty Without the sound of you ok... lost someone special No colors in my world - who was a significant part of your world... My rainbow's gone code blue lol ok this code blue is still confusing. To loose the colours in your world but then reflect it back onto a colorful rainbow. I suppose code blue is feeling blue and sad... So is this poem about loosing someone special which made you alone, empty, full of sorrow and taken a chunck outta your life to "take the colour away from your world and thus there is no color in you rainbow"? I had a go Hasie Link to comment
ShySoul Posted November 17, 2005 Share Posted November 17, 2005 Code blue is a medical term for an emergency or crisis. She's lost someone special and now her world has gone from a colorful rainbow of magic and hope to a disaster. Her heart is broken, is suffering in this moment of crisis. It's gone code blue. Nice analogy. And I see with your screen name that you like using things involving the weather. Hope things are ok and whatever inspired the poem gets better. Link to comment
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