PartlySunny Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 Heart Black and blue Weeping Over you Spirit Splintered shattered Tears Falling splattered Love Broken bleeding Hope Far and fleeting Rage Shaking heaving Bye Finally leaving Link to comment
BellaDonna Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 PartlySunny, I like your poem. Short- but it says quite a lot. For some reason, my favorite line is "Bye" BellaDonna Link to comment
PartlySunny Posted October 7, 2005 Author Share Posted October 7, 2005 Bella, Yes. Me too. Because that's where the power is. Link to comment
volution Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 If only more women had the power to say goodbye... Link to comment
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