siefer Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 I wrote this poem about having a girlfriend and the alienation of losing all your friends and losing touch with them. i dont know what its called im to late to have a friend i'll never see you again I have a girl to the fullest extent we just stay still till the end im not alive anymore the energy of time has left me sore theres no more wine and roses just whisky and lillies now all i can do is see you just circle around me makes my dialated heart want to leave its all sex and no play I dont expect her to go away i dont expect anything to change i just expect to be in my place Link to comment
skyteph Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 I like it, although it didn't leave me thinking about it, or pondering once I finished, so if that's what you intended then it didn't work for me (however I may just be a special case ), but apart from that I thought it was good! Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 Nice poem keep writing Link to comment
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