Sweet Sanity........

[troublegal05]

Distant to a land so far from here

I wonder into a city...

Its streets widen a path of corruption

and distain..

a foot deepened to the heart

of a land so far from here

I long to spot the light of hope onto my ruggish land

Taken to a dream my mind surrenders its sanity

to an imaginary world

A house made of gingerbread

a roof made from frosting

an edible suduction to a heart gone corrupt

A path made from bread crumbs shining its splender

to a door made of arsenic, a tender

sweetness to a life bruised deep

An imaginary world painted to ones fantasy,

seen by a desire to live

Sweet sanity's vain embrace has entranced my visions

of a world beyond

an eye, and walks my mind to a place all my own.

 

For the moment:

 

She stood there knee high in the salty bitterness of the sea

her grief opressed to her lonely presense

The salty winds brush against her powdered skin, combing

her chocolate curls around her neck

She takes a sigh to the calming winds,

a coat of salt flavors her lips with a desire long

before washed away by the waves

Her eyes take a glance towards the painted sky

and she wonders all the mysteries in life "Where do we go when we die"

"What makes a lived life"The deep impressions of the sand burry the blisters of her feet

sending chills of relief

For the time being all is forgotten

every worry, every fear passes to a crash of a wave

Such a calming world

Such a peaceful life[/i]

[Optimistic37]

wow, i have to say (i dont know why) but reading those poems just made me seem really calm and peaceful. I love the whole food idea in the first one which made is seem like a dark fairy tale.

Keep it up

[Jimbo10]

phybrid's right These are just nice to read. Much appreciated! thanks

[troublegal05]

Thank you phybrid and Jimbo for your kind replies..