trust, and my everything

[in_the_mirror]

i took all that i had,

more then i did before,

jumped in,

and loved with all my heart.

i knew i would be hurt.

i knew i could ruin my life,

but i knew my love meant more.

it has all gone and left,

and i know it is mostly my fault,

i knew that i made a mistake in my past.

i could trust,

i could believe,

i could take a running leap of faith,

to think that i would be caught,

but i was dropped,

i knew it would happen.

I couldn't let this love eat me away,

while i stand quietly and say nothing,

just like i always did.

i let loose my everything,

and showed you how i felt,

and for awhile it all was great,

but something ate away at you.

i can't teach someone

something they have never done before,

something that can't be taught,

the only thing that can't be taught...

trust.

 

 

this is just a rough draft..so sorry if it isn't very good. but i want people's input.

[behind_these_eyes]

I thought that was amazing. you have real talent, great job!

[Jimbo10]

i liked that. I'm a musician, and i could hear that being really nice if you get around to finding music, or a writer for it.

 

good luck

[PunkyMonkey]

I thought that was amazing. you have real talent, great job!

 

I agree, It's great!