Secrets

[i_hate_the_world47]

Secrets

 

Come walk with me dear child

Not through the valley of shadows, but through your dark secrets

Locked away deep inside your mind

Screaming,beggin,itching to get out

Hoping to escape

To tell the world about you

You my child, you are troubled,dark,secretive

Yet everyone looks beyond this

Not seeing the real you , but seeing the you that is black, darkened by the disease

What disease you ask

For it is one you have given yourself

A disease that kills like AIDS and is so miniscule it isn't given a second glance

Its your disease

A disease that you and only you can acquire, a disease that will linger until the secrets leave

Now you lay down your head, trying to drown out the secrets

The secrets that will never rest, they lay burrowed in your mind until judgment day

So rest my child, your secrets are safe with me, until judgment day

Which shall come only when you decide to release your secrets

So sleep-forever

 

Hey guys,i hope you like the poem,cuz i dont.

 

~Meagan~

[unforgiven]

hello meagen i thougth your poem was great . what's wrong with it i was reading some of the others and i must say you are really good this is my frist time here and this is my frist post it feels like to me that there's something on your mind care to share it with me.

 

unforgiven

[behind_these_eyes]

Great job, I thought that was awesome. It's really deep to think about, I like that. Keep writing, I like your stuff.

[i_hate_the_world47]

Thanx guys

 

~meagan~

[Stinkweed]

Wow, great poem. Again, you never cease to amaze me. Keep up the good work =D>.

[i_hate_the_world47]

Thanx for all the comments guys.Its so nice to hear that ppl like my work.

 

~meagan~