evepm Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 I remember you in your blue suit, three years old with sad brown eyes, blond hair with a cowlick over on eye. Christmas trees, and Santa Claus, rocking horse, red wagon and laugter. I remember that laughter, raucous, a mirror of my own. I remember that last day. You told your wife you wanted to go home. For the life of a child, I remember. ~ On behalf of my mother who wrote this poem for my brother who is no longer with us. ~ Link to comment
Stinkweed Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 I like this poem, but it's so sad it made me cry... I'm very sorry about your brother. I wish you the best... Link to comment
Protex Posted August 18, 2004 Share Posted August 18, 2004 Very powerful poem. My deepest sympathy. Link to comment
writergurl Posted August 18, 2004 Share Posted August 18, 2004 Very sad! But a beautiful poem. Link to comment
evepm Posted August 18, 2004 Author Share Posted August 18, 2004 Thank you to everyone who took the time to read this. A special thank you to those of you who sent your sympathies. Link to comment
hardcore Posted August 18, 2004 Share Posted August 18, 2004 i love this poem it is very good if i could cry i would be rigth now. Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 19, 2004 Share Posted August 19, 2004 Wow,that was a verh heartful poem.It brought tears to my eyes.I am so sorry for your loss. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
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