long death poem

[dpressedone89]

How could you do this to me

putting me through so much

now i am dazed and confused

lost and out of touch

 

when you cut yourself

i bleed to death

and i forsake you

and scream i hate you with my dying breath

 

i take your promises

and wrap them around me

to hide within from the darkness

that i live in that surrounds me

 

but they all turn to lies

and your friendly words to snakes

like a fragile mirror

my spirit like which breaks

 

you say it was your last time

you've thrown away that fateful knife

but too deep did you slice

slowing taking my life

 

like rain the drops of red love hits the floor

cold, trickling down from my wrist

racing these blood stained tears to the ground

praying to cease to exist

 

i am far derranged

and mentally unsure

your solution is a disease

but to you its viewed as a cure

 

to hurt yourself

kills me inside

i do it too

to make the pain subside

 

but we need to stop

it now controls us from our minds

i have stopped for you

but you, a reason couldnt find

 

my life lay on the floor in shambles

puddles of life flood the ground

your red fluid now not mine

killing me without a sound

 

if you really cared you would stop

or at least try

you said you would

but like "i love you" it was just another lie

 

if you want to hurt me feel free to

i dont want to be happy anymore

so in the dark both of us bleeding

lifeless, bleeding on the floor

 

and when it be done

those who care truly mourn

and they have un justified scars

beleiving we died with scorn

 

but its the circle of life

and the circle of death

from the first cut

to the final breath

 

thank you for taking my life

together forever,until our dying day

leaving a lasting mark

together forever, until we fade away

 

-stitches aka The Antihero

what do you guys think?

[hardcore]

i really like it it spoke to me

[someone51189]

whoa.. it made me look at a diff side of things.. its amazin how good u are at this.. i loved it

[i_hate_the_world47]

wow.deep poem.I could relate to it very well.

 

~Meagan~

[Stinkweed]

This poem is really good. It expresses such deep emotions... Great job =D>.

[EmptySoul]

I love it, you've done a good job of expressing your emotions. The imagry is good and it shows your talent.

 

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