keep45 Posted August 15, 2004 Share Posted August 15, 2004 In a very depressed mood for some reason, so I made a poem, which is not what I usually do, heh... Enjoy or throw up... Probably the latter. Alone down there and nobody cares if you have air or if you're bare. Wounded and cold you're floored but still not old just young and lured. No help from others no sympathy at all you have no druthers you are just enthralled. Link to comment
hardcore Posted August 15, 2004 Share Posted August 15, 2004 i like the poem it was very good Link to comment
Stinkweed Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Cool poem. I really like it. It's got a good use of rhythm and expresses emotions as well. I like the fact that it's straight to the point. Great job =D>. Link to comment
lookingformyredangel Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 I really like it. Good job. The emotion is really there Link to comment
writergurl Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 I enjoyed the poem, writing can be a great release when you're depressed or mad or whatever you're feeling. You should try it more often. Thanks for sharing. I like it. Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Short but sweet.I loved your poem. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
keep45 Posted August 16, 2004 Author Share Posted August 16, 2004 Thank you all. Made me smile. Link to comment
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