poem please read and reply thanks

[ang3l2004]

Stop this mess stop the lies stop my pain and my cries,

Someone heal me make me whole my precious life heart and soul.

 

Give me power and let me fly let me live I dont want to die,

Give me hope and joy inside let me have love let me have pride.

 

Love me in and outside to stop me from being so lonely and blue,

Hold me tight never let me go for I want your love to show.

 

Know that I miss and love you so much miss the way you use to touch,

Wipe the tears from my sad eyes im taking off my mask no longer in disguise.

 

I am looking around only to see that this is not the person I want to be,

Let me be who I want to be please open your eyes and look at me.

 

Kiss my lips and rub my face tell me that I will never replace,

Show me you care and lay with me rub your fingers through my hair.

 

Live life like it was your last head for the future and get over the past,

Take my hand and hold it tight come caress me all through the night.

 

Never forget the person here for you remember all the things I do,

Enjoy the time you have here with me tomorrow could be the last cant you see?

 

tell me what you think??

[mtastic]

ang3l2004,

 

I like it, its a good breakup poem, and has a fairly hopeful message in the end.

 

Keep up the good work,

mtastic

[ang3l2004]

Thankyou so much

[i_hate_the_world47]

great poem.

 

~Meagan~

[dpressedone89]

beautiful poem =D>

[rbelle]

Love it!!!!!!!

[Stinkweed]

That's an amazing poem. Keep up the good work =D>.