EmptySoul Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 God Are you there? What if they're all wrong Praying only to the sky And nothing more? Did you really die for us On that cross In all the pain Of humankind I don't know anymore. Love Are you there? What if they're all wrong Living for nothing Nothing at all Every kiss And word Does it mean anything? I don't know anymore. Someone, Anyone Am I here? What if this depression Swallows me And everyone forgets Who I was to them And I'm alone forever What if I drown in my own tears If I lie down And can never find the strength To get back up again If everyone just keeps pointing And laughing And I explode on the inside And no one sees If I just fade Until even the sun will never shine on me WHAT IF THIS NEVER ENDS? I don't know what's going on. Oh God. I'm just so tired. I am too young to be so tired. EmptySoul Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 wow that was really poetic i know how you feel you still have a vague grip on your faith dont ever let go. i did and i have regretted it evry day of my life. whether or not there is is a god you need something to believe in. if you ever need to talk some one to listen my email is email removed you are obviously a good person i myself have wondered if there was a god it was like gee thanks a lot you just sit there watching the world corrupt it self that was really deep and heartfelt email me if u need a friend Link to comment
Mr. Good Man Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 EmptySoul that was beautiful! Yes! Love and God is there. As dpressedone89 said, "...don't ever let go." I know it's hard to believe in things you can't touch and see. Plus, it's not like their busting down your door saying, "I'm here!" Here's a tip to let you know if God is with you. Remember a time when that little voice told you, "Don't do that" and you didn't listen? What happened? What is warned you about happened and it wasn't pleasant. Well, if you listen to that voice you will discover that it's never wrong. As for as I know the only person who's always right is God. Start listening to that voice. Hear what it has to say. And do what is says. I've been listening for the past six years and it has save my butt several times. Let me know if this little exercise works for you. Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 life sux if u r alone as long as you have your beliefs you are never alone there is no pain greater than that of nothing. your writing is beautiful and i am amazed at how deeply you feel things. im still not sure if gods out there i like to think so but i am sure you will find love and hopefully i will also. Link to comment
planman Posted May 17, 2004 Share Posted May 17, 2004 I like it, but remember, but by questioning you learn more about urself and about a higher being good luck with ur quest. Link to comment
Rage Posted May 17, 2004 Share Posted May 17, 2004 I really like it Empty Soul.....something everyone can relate to at some point Link to comment
ForAnother Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 Empty Soul... I loved it. I honestly and utterly loved the style of it, and just wow! I cried through it. Thank you for posting that, it really really touched me. ForAnother Link to comment
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