Beoslasher Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 What If I didn't walk you home? What if the snow didn't touch the ground? what if I never said I love you? would you even still be around? What if the last thing I said was I hate you? what if in the next day you died? what if the first thing I said was I need you? What If i said it all of the time? What If I said I called you a liar? What If I can still feel your lips upon mine? What if your perfume still lingers around me? Is it still wrong I wish you were mine? What If you change your mind every hour? What if your never sure what you want? What If I left more bitter than before? I'm quite sure its not what you want? What If I just want you out of my life? What If these actually happened? What If I'm ice cracking faster as each part of you warms me up? What If a part of me broke away followed then by another part to? What if this kept happening until I were Icebergs in a sea of you? Link to comment
Sn0man Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 If you see yourself as landmines to her desert - best to pull your mines until she's negotiated the labrynth. Link to comment
redrose85 Posted December 9, 2008 Share Posted December 9, 2008 your mind amazes me sometimes Link to comment
Beoslasher Posted December 9, 2008 Author Share Posted December 9, 2008 How does it amaze you? Link to comment
redrose85 Posted December 9, 2008 Share Posted December 9, 2008 The depth of your thoughts and emotions. You seem to be able to get exactly what you are feeling/thinking onto the pages of many of your poems, and I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one who "feels" your emotions. It's a great talent to have. Link to comment
Beoslasher Posted December 9, 2008 Author Share Posted December 9, 2008 Thank you very much!, I just think too much, this is one of my only vents so I tend to post here a bit more than I should =P. But I am honored that you think its a great talent, I think its more of a curse sometimes. Link to comment
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