dnsking Posted February 6, 2004 Share Posted February 6, 2004 I dont know if this poem is good but i wrote for someone who wont be getting it so im posting it here. I hope everyone has a good Valentines day, even though i dont have a gf rigth now i dont hate valentines day. I hope everyone whos going through a break up, keep their head up and things do and will get better. My Valentines Poem You were mine I was yours Two lovers with no lost hours You and I had all the power Twice I gave you flowers Everyday was like Valentines Day You would never stay away We used to be so happy together Two birds singing love songs in nice weather Now we are both separated Still our love can't be faded Our hearts remain unbreakable Our souls remain unchangeable My love for you hasn't changed Our life's just got rearranged The love I had remains the same I see the word "love" and it spells out your name Now all we have is time Once again you shall be my Valentine That's when I know your all mine United together for a lifetime Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted February 6, 2004 Share Posted February 6, 2004 i iked your poem, if i was being honest the beginning got off to a slow and slightly confusing one for me, however i really liked this part: The love I had remains the same I see the word "love" and it spells out your name great poem, deffinitley inspiring just by what you put at the top. but i cant say i enjoy valentines day even though i am with some one. weird really. kel Link to comment
whitefang Posted February 6, 2004 Share Posted February 6, 2004 I really liked your poem, it's better than anything that i can come up with and that usually ends up being nothing... lol. It was very good - whitefang Link to comment
heart4chris Posted February 25, 2004 Share Posted February 25, 2004 That was a really nice poem... my favorite part of the poem was The love I had remains the same I see the word "love" and it spells out your name It was great, keep up the good work Link to comment
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