felt like sharing this

[dnsking]

I dont know if this poem is good but i wrote for someone who wont be getting it so im posting it here. I hope everyone has a good Valentines day, even though i dont have a gf rigth now i dont hate valentines day. I hope everyone whos going through a break up, keep their head up and things do and will get better.

 

My Valentines Poem

 

You were mine I was yours

Two lovers with no lost hours

You and I had all the power

Twice I gave you flowers

 

Everyday was like Valentines Day

You would never stay away

We used to be so happy together

Two birds singing love songs in nice weather

 

Now we are both separated

Still our love can't be faded

Our hearts remain unbreakable

Our souls remain unchangeable

 

My love for you hasn't changed

Our life's just got rearranged

The love I had remains the same

I see the word "love" and it spells out your name

 

Now all we have is time

Once again you shall be my Valentine

That's when I know your all mine

United together for a lifetime

[neva_black_n_white]

i iked your poem, if i was being honest the beginning got off to a slow and slightly confusing one for me, however i really liked this part:

The love I had remains the same

I see the word "love" and it spells out your name

 

great poem, deffinitley inspiring just by what you put at the top. but i cant say i enjoy valentines day even though i am with some one. weird really.

 

kel

[david90]

that is cool

[whitefang]

I really liked your poem, it's better than anything that i can come up with and that usually ends up being nothing... lol.

 

It was very good

 

- whitefang

[heart4chris]

That was a really nice poem...

 

my favorite part of the poem was

 

The love I had remains the same

I see the word "love" and it spells out your name

 

 

 

It was great, keep up the good work