Poetry

[Creep]

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You must do whatever I say now, you will finally repay

You will suffer for what you did to me, for that you denied me to be the person I wanted to be

You made me pound, now I will turn your world around

You will be left in the cold, for all the crap that I have always been told

You ruined my life, now I will soon get the knife

You will be the sucker this time, for that you made me commit all the crime

Now I will retaliate, now I will decide your fate

I am sorry to see our friendship end, but the broken bones can no longer bend

I have taken care of everything, everything except for the sting

 

 

You

 

All my rage, you made me fight

I am locked up in a cage, you turned off my light

All my sorrow, you made me sick

Soon there will be no tomorrow, you pulled me over by one little trick

Now I lie down and dream, because of you I died

Rest so I can be able to scream, was it murder or was it suicide?

All my sadness, you made me kill

Now I have less, you gave me no pill

All my control, you won me by fake charm

You broke my soul, you only harm

All my dirt, you took me down

You gave me no alert, you made me drown

 

--Creep =)

[neva_black_n_white]

its a little morbid but i like the way you worded it. its unique, who made you feel like that?

 

i mean murder and suicide its not the greatest thing to write about, what empowered you to do so?

 

still i like the rhyming.

 

kel

[Happy_Go_Lucky_Heb]

lol yea I agree wif kel there. I can sense a suicidal feel to it. Yea give it to her! Make her realise what she's done, make her feel the guilt.

 

However I do reckon that to write about suicide and stuff is actually ok. How many ppl actually go the distance and how many of us can end our lives willingly? The odds are against it. Plus I think writing and expressin feelings is a great way to get things out, and you usually feel slightly better after you have as we think so much when there's some sorta crisis going on that the only way for me to process those thoughts is to write them down as during the process of writing, you classify etc etc what's going on then you understand. Ok kinda hard to explain...

 

Hey kel!

Bye all

 

Happy Heb

[Creep]

A lot of people have made me feel like that. I've had a lot of trouble in my life. I find it easy to express my true feelings through writing.

[neva_black_n_white]

so who is it that has initially hurt you to believe or become into the feelings that you express in the poem.

you say you find it easy to write and i can understand that because as ive said before i need to depressed just to get some 'real' words out, if you get me?

 

hey happy.

 

kel

[Creep]

Almost everyone I know has stabbed me in the back. The poem is particularly about one person I know. That person has hurt me many, many times.