Desire

[Beoslasher]

I'm helpless against the current

and I'm drowning with my feelings,

and the undertow is pulling

where I know I shouldn't go

 

I know I shouldn't envy

and I know I shouldn't worry

but all I do is worry

about the things that I want

 

The world is very loving

and the world so full of hate

and the world so full of feelings

the world we cant escape

 

I try to face the feelings

and rage against the line

But all I want is everything

one moment at a time

 

Reach into yourself

and find what you need

not what you desire

what you crave, or what you see

 

I hear whispers in my ear

confusing what I really feel

I want to understand myself

desire your ways confuse me

desire, what is this that I'm feeling

 

You tell me somewhere to go

but its not the place where I know

down a backwards alley

or an empty street

I feel you deserting me

then where am I?

then where am I?

[yeawutever]

Helpless can sometimes be a negative event in our daily save, but just remember that there are still people that care about you. Nice poem by the way!!!!!!!!!!

[Shadows Light]

Beoslasher...

 

I haven't been to the poetry corner of this forum in a long long long time.

Most probably hiding from my own feelings and itch to tap-tap on the keys and spill the beans for the world to see.

 

But I'm glad to have come here tonight... your words play a familiar melody in my heart and wake my slumbering soul.

 

Thank-you!!!

[karma85]

Dang...pretty deep stuff. I like it... I like how the story comes together.....

And in a way how dark it was i like it good work!...

 

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