Supa_gurl Posted August 23, 2008 Share Posted August 23, 2008 The rain comes Pouring from my eyes Tired of feeling lost Trapped in this disguise Where did I go Can you find me I am so lost Why should this be You loved me I thought forever But so many mistakes makes me feel like never I want some trust But alas- I only see your disgust. Link to comment
Loki71 Posted August 23, 2008 Share Posted August 23, 2008 very sad, but also very well done. Link to comment
Stella Sleepwalks Posted August 23, 2008 Share Posted August 23, 2008 I really liked it xxx Link to comment
Supa_gurl Posted August 23, 2008 Author Share Posted August 23, 2008 I really liked it xxx Thank you xxx back at ya Link to comment
agburns84 Posted August 24, 2008 Share Posted August 24, 2008 Hey Supa_gurl, That was lovely, lots of emotion. I think you should now consider yourself a poet! Link to comment
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