never posted 1 of my poems before so plz be nice

[whathappensnext]

poems are the last thing

in my mind

till life hits a snag

and starts to rewind

i see the little things

that made up my life

it cuts and tears

like a dull bladed knife

1 thing that causes

the most pain

not many know

so i wont say the name

everywhere i go

anything i see

reminds me of u and me

dwelling on the past

isn't somthing i like to do

but i will till im with u

[niczeegs]

You should post your poems more often.

[Censored]

^Damn Straight...

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

I really really like it, i can relate to it and that also helps, i agree post some more

[Portage]

I fourth the motion

[whathappensnext]

thank you im glad u aprove of my poem.kinda popped into my head lastnight

[hosswhispra]

thank you im glad u aprove of my poem.kinda popped into my head lastnight

 

Those are usually the best kind--the ones that aren't forced. Thanks, I enjoyed this one!