Katiekate010 Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 ok i have been just playing with it but i have a beat i just need more words and a title so feel free to add to this...... ( no title ) I need a verse one... (chorus) Have you ever been in love so much it hurt inside have you ever missed someone so much it made you cry, have you ever sat and thought all day about someone have you ever thought theyd be the one..... have you ever...... ooohh have you ever (verse 2) How many sleepless nights ive had because of you thought about me and you and figured it was to good to be true your arms around me my arms around you you made me feel like nothing could get through and i hope you feel the same way too (chorus) Have you ever been in love so much it hurt inside have you ever missed someone so much it made you cry, have you ever sat and thought all day about someone have you ever thought theyd be the one..... have you ever...... ooohh have you ever i need a third verse....... (chorus) Have you ever been in love so much it hurt inside have you ever missed someone so much it made you cry, have you ever sat and thought all day about someone have you ever thought theyd be the one..... have you ever...... ooohh have you ever and i need an ending i want a ttile that is not have you ever if possible because there are too many of that song thanks guys Link to comment
musicguy Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 Here are a few possible titles: Miss The Feeling Of Being With You Thoughts Of You The Memories Of Being In Love Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 Professional-quality lyrics, no doubt. I would call it The Thirst (For You). Link to comment
Katiekate010 Posted September 8, 2007 Author Share Posted September 8, 2007 thanks, i like the (the thirst for you) hey do you have any lyrics i also liked the other ones too great titles guys thanks Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 Lying here without you near, it gives me such an ache My hand's in the space where you should be, my heart is threatening to break Oh, how can I fight all the misery When I can't feel the touch that comforts me I just don't know how much I can take Tbh, I can't quite make out the tune, but maybe you can make this work as a first verse with some minor word tweaking. As far as the end goes, try to make it upbeat. (The song will sell better.) Link to comment
Katiekate010 Posted September 8, 2007 Author Share Posted September 8, 2007 haha thanks idk if i will be selling lol and the words fit you dont mind me using them do you? Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 They're yours, if you promise to post some of your future works here. ^_^ Link to comment
Katiekate010 Posted September 9, 2007 Author Share Posted September 9, 2007 ok i sure will thanks..... do you think they should be the first verse third verse or the ending Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 I wrote it as a first verse, to more or less set the scene for the the song. But hey, it's yours now, so put it where you think it fits best. Link to comment
AwdreeHpburn Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 How About HAVE YOU EVER for a title?? Link to comment
AwdreeHpburn Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 .....just kidding Link to comment
Katiekate010 Posted September 9, 2007 Author Share Posted September 9, 2007 How About HAVE YOU EVER for a title?? i didnt want that one bc there are too many songs named that Link to comment
AwdreeHpburn Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 I'm sorry - I was totally kidding cos I saw that you said that. I was being silly..... Link to comment
AwdreeHpburn Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 OK - How about this : (and I'm not joking around anymore) For the title: I HAVE... for an ending Cos I have, I have, I have Spent sleepless nights so happily Cried tears of joy in disbelief Of What I have, I have I have I have you. Link to comment
Katiekate010 Posted September 9, 2007 Author Share Posted September 9, 2007 Actually i think i have finished it tell me what ya think (Title) I Miss The Feeling (Verse 1) Sitting here, laying here standing there, Wishing you were near Loving you its killing me Even though I know that you and me can never be (Chorus) Have you ever been in love so much it hurt inside Have you ever missed someone so much it made you cry, Have you ever sat and thought all day about someone Have you ever thought they’d be the one..... Have you ever...... ooohh have you ever (Verse 2) How many sleepless nights I’ve had because of you Thought about me and you and wishes it wasn’t to good to be true Your arms around me my arms around you You made me feel like nothing could get through And I hope you feel the same way too (Chorus) Have you ever been in love so much it hurt inside Have you ever missed someone so much it made you cry, Have you ever sat and thought all day about someone Have you ever thought they’d be the one..... Have you ever...... ooohh have you ever (Verse 3) Sitting here without you near, it gives me such an ache My hand's in the space where you should be, my heart is threatening to break Oh, how can I fight all the misery When I can't feel the touch that comforts me I just don't know how much I can take Let's just hope m heart doesn't break (Chorus) Have you ever been in love so much it hurt inside Have you ever missed someone so much it made you cry, Have you ever sat and thought all day about someone Have you ever thought they’d be the one..... Have you ever...... ooohh have you ever (Ending) Have you ever, have you ever ooohhh have you ever cause I have Have you ever ohhhhh have you ever Link to comment
AwdreeHpburn Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 HEY!!! That's what I said!!! ........sort of. see above^ I even suggested I HAVE as the title........ Link to comment
Katiekate010 Posted September 9, 2007 Author Share Posted September 9, 2007 yeah thanks do you like it? Link to comment
AwdreeHpburn Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 Yeh - a lot. I think it fits. (obviously cos I wrote the same words....) I do like it. Sounds GREAT Link to comment
Katiekate010 Posted September 9, 2007 Author Share Posted September 9, 2007 thanks ill make a youtube of it sooner or later and share the link Link to comment
Katiekate010 Posted September 9, 2007 Author Share Posted September 9, 2007 Thanks everybody soooo much for helping me i really like the way the son turned out i will def. share a youtube link Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 Monster cool. Looking forward to hearing it. Just a thought: "I Miss The Feeling" seems like a pretty good title just by itself... Link to comment
Katiekate010 Posted September 9, 2007 Author Share Posted September 9, 2007 your right imma change that Link to comment
musicguy Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 ooo I helped out this will be a Grammy nominated song Link to comment
Katiekate010 Posted September 9, 2007 Author Share Posted September 9, 2007 ooo I helped out this will be a Grammy nominated song Lol yeah you did id like to thank you for that as for the Grammy nominaton i dont know about that lol doubt it will ever leave my den lol but thanks you guys! Link to comment
musicguy Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 lol......you're welcome Link to comment
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