AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 16, 2007 Share Posted May 16, 2007 If i could heal a broken heart, It would be yours that i would heal. I want you to learn to love, For love is all you dream to feel. And if i could create one small smile, Upon your face it would be. I'd love to watch your smiling face, A twinkle in your eye is what i wish to see. If i could love just one person, I'd love you for all eternity, A kind sweet love, More magical then reality. If i could hold you in my arms, I'd hold you tight as tight can be, So much it does hurt, Knowing i have to set you free. For though my hearts aches, To love your passionate soul. Your heart has been stolen, By a girl as dark as coal. She is nothing you deserve, She is nothing more then hate, Hunny don't allow this wicked girl, To decide upon your fate. Oh if it is not me, You wish to hold at night, At least let it be someone, Who can restore your inner light. Don't waste your life away, Over someone who does not care, Don't be ruled, By someone so simply unfair. And if you ever dream of me, Or wish you had me back. Here i shall be waiting, Until my destiny turns black. Link to comment
girl friend Posted May 16, 2007 Share Posted May 16, 2007 Wow, magnificent. Touching. Depth. Loving. Incredible. Who is it about though hun? Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 17, 2007 Author Share Posted May 17, 2007 The same guy as always i guess... Though it could be said about a few people at the moment. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 18, 2007 Author Share Posted May 18, 2007 mmmm not really... kind of... but not at the moment its hard to explain. Link to comment
TheFallenShadow Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 This is very well written, and yes this one speaks to me in volumes, which is something rarely done. so thank you for the gift of your writing... Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted June 12, 2007 Author Share Posted June 12, 2007 Thankyou TheFallenShadow. It means alot knowing people understand your words. Link to comment
TheFallenShadow Posted June 12, 2007 Share Posted June 12, 2007 Aye, tis so true, when you can write and it can bind someone with a feeling. please do keep wrting, i have enjoyed reading your works Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted June 12, 2007 Share Posted June 12, 2007 This verse says it all for me: Oh if it is not me, You wish to hold at night, At least let it be someone, Who can restore your inner light. Yours is a little different than the usual "I want you back" poems I run into all the time on ENA, because it gives me the feeling that you truly care about what's right for the person you're addressing and not just about yourself and what you want. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted July 17, 2007 Author Share Posted July 17, 2007 Sorry for the late reply TheFallenShadow, i will deffinately continue to write, its like my way to get what i mean out. Sometimes i can't word it out loud but writing it in poetry helps. Thankyou Somebloke, i guess the saying if you love someone who have to let tem go can be true. Theres no point in clinging to something that isn't making people happy, but making them happy should mean more then being selfish i guess. Link to comment
dietrying Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, thanks for sharing it. Very touching. Link to comment
indigo_scar Posted August 8, 2007 Share Posted August 8, 2007 I agree with everyone else. This poem was really well written. Such depth and emotion have gone into it. Indigo x Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 8, 2007 Author Share Posted August 8, 2007 Thankyou so much everyone. I didn't realise people were still replying to this. This poem still speaks truth unfortunately but i guess at 16 we can just wait for someone even more special Link to comment
indigo_scar Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 Sure thing. And the positive attitude will get you miles. =) Theres so much more time to find that special one. x Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 I've just read your reply to my comment for the first time. Theres no point in clinging to something that isn't making people happy, but making them happy should mean more then being selfish i guess. So, so true. If everyone kept this in mind and true unselfish love flowed in all directions between all people whether they were attracted to each other or not, the Earth would be a paradise. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 9, 2007 Author Share Posted August 9, 2007 Indigo, so so right are you! Friends can be so much more important, especially as a teenager. Guys just get you heartbroken but your makes are there to help when they do. Somebloke, now if only we could tell the rest of the world! But unfortunately so many people are so malicious. My grandma is always telling me to be carefull of everyone. Even people i have known since i was 4! Even my family.. Its a horrible thought really. Link to comment
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