deathreaper Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 Oh how my pain is revealed This all does not seem so real when will this nightmare be over when will i stop getting screwed over I miss talking to you in a friendly way it seems all we do is fight night and day Im sorry it all had to end up this way I just want to kiss you once and then go away Link to comment
Lovestragedies Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 I'm sorry you've experienced such pain. Link to comment
Lovestragedies Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 Would you like to talk about what happened? Or were you simply expressing yourself through poetry? In that case, it's a very good poem. But if you wish to talk about it, do so. Link to comment
deathreaper Posted April 15, 2007 Author Share Posted April 15, 2007 Thanks for the compliment; i was surprised to have some one say its good...i just recently got to writing poems it is both a poem of pain and love, if you want you can PM me with questions im not too keen on letting everyone see what my problem is..since youre a fellow floridian ill make an exception Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 I love it, its not just good but great in my opinion. Love can really hurt sometimes but its good to remember that thats just one part of it, and the goods must outway the bads Link to comment
deathreaper Posted April 16, 2007 Author Share Posted April 16, 2007 thanks rozi, love hurts but in the ends its worth it, Link to comment
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