All I see is You

[rowboat]

It comes from the heart

Only existing for you

An angel from above

Sent down residing in you

 

The talent I witness

It always shines through

The brilliance is

So exclusively you

 

I feel the humour

The quick wit

Always sharing a good quip

Only you, bring such a bliss

 

You mind labours

In such great ways

A genius at work

Throughout the day

 

A kinder heart

I’ve found none

A loving sole

For ever the one

 

Your gorgeous smile

And elegant eyes

Your stunning beauty

Creates a magnificent view

 

I bundle this together

And all I see is you

 

 

Tell me what you all think, I would love some constructive criticism(please!!)

[Ellie2006]

Hey Rowboat,

A lovely poem.

Admittedly, it get a bit cliched in some places (sorry to be so blunt! but I especially loved these lines: "The brilliance is / So exclusively you"

 

Keep writing!

 

Ellie 1:

[mikeca]

very nicely done