Wondering if i should try this.....

[Jitrenda]

Hey everyone!

 

I wrote a poem for this guy i like. He and i used to be roommates and now i have moved out.

 

I moved out on August 23, 2003.

 

I wrote the poem today (August 25, 2003)

 

My question to you all here at enotalone.com is do i send him this poem?

 

And if you think i should, should i send it via e'mail or should he read it in person?

 

Please read when you have time and let me know...thank you so much!

 

I Like You

 

If I told you I like you,

What would you say?

 

Would you say I like you too?

Or would you say,

 

Let’s just be friends?

 

I get the feeling you like me,

But I am unsure

 

I am terrified to tell you my feelings

For fear you don’t feel the same

 

I asked you twice if you like me,

Roundabout answers is all I received

 

I miss you so much it hurts.

I cry because you are not here

 

I never thought I would miss you this much

I have always liked you, but I kept it buried

 

And then it came to passing

And now I don’t know what to do with my feelings

 

I put them away, wondering

Was I just hallucinating?

 

I may have given you mixed signals,

And for that “I’m sorry” from the bottom of my heart

 

But here I am pouring out my heart to you

The fear of rejection is strong

 

But my hope is brighter yet

 

Was I imagining something that you don’t feel?

 

I like you.

 

I like your smile

I like your eyes, so full of soul.

 

I like you.

You listen when sometimes I get the feeling you don’t want to.

 

You genuinely seem to care

When you saw me at my worst, you didn’t budge,

 

You stayed by me.

I hate to be weak, worse, to show I am weak,

 

But it didn’t faze you

Thank you.

 

I like you.

But most of all I like your hugs.

 

You hug me so tight, like you never want to let me go.

I feel safe with you when you hug me like that

 

My head fits perfectly on your shoulder

When you hug me,

 

The world fades away and all I know is you

I know that everything will be all right because you are there.

 

You keep me sane.

When I am with you, I know I will be all right.

 

Without you I am lost, stressed and unbalanced.

I need you in my life; you keep me on an even keel.

 

I like you.

But do you like me?

 

-jitrenda

[puffdaddycurl]

Well im not the greatest on poems but its common sense when you see a good one,but to me this one goes beyond that its awsome in my feelings. cause if some girl sent me that there is no way i could say no.

 

I hope you send it to him cause i think you should

 

 

sincerly

Puff

[tlcasap]

wow that is really nice. I wish I could be that good at writing how i feel. You have a quality that is great and far too many people hide. You express yourself. I would say to give it to him but before you do understand that people don't always feel the same way back and it hurts when they dont but its reality. As long as your honest with yourself you will never regret a thing. If he does not care about you in that way you have to look at the bright side and be thankfull that at least he is a part of your life and respect his feelings. But not telling him how you feel would be much worse.

[Superfly81]

What do you have to loose? Go for it! and good luck.

[idunno]

if he cares about you at all your poem will probably melt him down to nothing. not enough girls say things to their men like you said.

[puffdaddycurl]

Yeah i know what your saying i wish girls said that kind of stuff to guys.... i mean are you guys scared or somthin because i bet almost every guy will melt with somthin like that given to them. But yeah you girls need to write to your guys like that WE LIKE IT well at least I do

 

[neva_black_n_white]

great poem, and if thats how you honestly feel then i figure that you'll be missing out if you dont give it him.

just go for it theres no way that he wont understand how you feel now and i believe anyone would love to receive that as a poem.

great work.

and since your only gonna live once go for it big time and give it in person not via e-mail. (well thats what id reccomend)

hope this helps

~kel