Rain and Teardrops

[dil]

I promised to post a decent poem of mine:

 

Rain and Teardrops

 

The gloomy sky opens up and cries.

The greyness of the weather reflects in my eyes.

The fog engulfs my window like a ghost.

I start pondering about what I miss the most.

Glistening rain droplets collect on my window.

The drops of water are much like my sorrow,

They cling together and slowly descend.

My mind is something I cannot mend.

I go unfocused, blurry shapes and lights.

I feel so low in this city of great heights.

My light dims; my candle begins to fade.

The darkness of the past cuts me like a blade.

I long for the water to wash away the past.

I long for a freedom from memory amassed.

The weather embodies what I cannot portray.

There is no tomorrow without a yesterday.

There are countless things that cannot be undone.

I stare out the window, longing for the sun.

The wicked weather has no pity.

Rainwater continues to drench this city.

[Ellie2006]

Dil, just wondering ... how long have you been writing poetry?!

This is great, by the way!

[dil]

Dil, just wondering ... how long have you been writing poetry?!

This is great, by the way!

 

three years.

 

I've written 60+ poems.

[darkling]

I like it, good work

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Yeah its really good. Great work

[brokenbird]

...the imagery...really liked the poem

[Bada-Bing]

very nicely written, especailly with the deeper and understanding of what has been wrote