GottaLetItBurn Posted September 8, 2006 Share Posted September 8, 2006 I recently have checked up on the girl who broke my hearts myspace. She completely threw me away for her ex and now I see he cheated on her and it's over. So I feel a little bad because now I can see she is moving on, and now im probably more forgotten as Im sure she is probably thinking of news guys and if anything else..him. I just feel stupid for seeing her page, so I felt I should write about how I've felt for the last year. Time to Move On When you want them back nothing else matters Time slows down Your heart is shattered Why didn't I make a move I guess I'll have to learn She's not coming back But I'll still wait for her return The worlds not spinning My hearts gone cold How could this be? If I still have my soul Life doesn't seem the same But haven't I weathered the storm? I think if could just see her smile Then maybe my heart would warm My heart is closed filled with fear I'm left with no strength To wipe my own tears I feel used Even Betrayed I cared for her Why didn't she stay? I hope she finds true happiness Love she can't believe A better love she could had even with me Memories still hurt I have fought off all regret I will always miss her My heart will not forget She is irreplaceable A section of my new heart With me until the end It hurts so bad to move on without my friend Link to comment
BellaDonna Posted September 8, 2006 Share Posted September 8, 2006 That is very nice poem. But, you know what? She is irreplaceable She is replacable, you just don't know it yet. In fact, not only is she replacable, but you can actually do better. You can find someone who will reciprocate your love, who won't take you for granted, and who will not cheat on you.... She completely threw me away for her ex and now I see he cheated on her and it's over. karma..... Someday you will be able to write a love poem to a person that deserves it. Hang in there. I know it hurts now, but a brighter future is ahead. I think in order for you to heal- you will have to stop looking at her myspace page. You're just going to keep feeling more hurt if you check up on her. BellaDonna Link to comment
GottaLetItBurn Posted September 8, 2006 Author Share Posted September 8, 2006 Yeah, I went about 5 months without looking at her page. Then I just couldn't fight it anymore. I just want to care about something again, I have been feeling empty. Hopeless. I know what you mean though, everyone seems to get through it. There is just something about seeing her move on, it's like I'm just a faded memory now. Everyone says I'll find someone better, but the only thing I really feels is that I want her. The part of me that knows better is getting tired of fighting the side the puts her on a pedastal. I'm tired of thinking about her. What is the point of all this, getting your heartbroken. What does it teach anyone? besides the fact that this can be a cruel world. Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 9, 2006 Share Posted September 9, 2006 Awww, your poem really made me feel thing sense of longing in my heart, it's really beautiful Link to comment
GottaLetItBurn Posted September 9, 2006 Author Share Posted September 9, 2006 Thank you very much I appreciate it...I think a lot of people don't really look at other peoples poems that much unless they can relate to it. This one is tailored to my situation, so I didn't expect much feedback. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 10, 2006 Share Posted September 10, 2006 I agree with Ms babydoll i loved it! Link to comment
valenski Posted September 10, 2006 Share Posted September 10, 2006 You're right Gottoletitburn, there is alot of people that can relate to a broken heart expressed through a soulful poem and I find its easier to convey emtions through poems. Link to comment
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