*strength*

[neva_black_n_white]

how much does this -

have a hold over you?

 

how hard is it -

to watch your life be consumed?

 

how long will it take -

for you to understand

 

that the course you have taken -

holds out no hands?

 

how hard is it to watch -

your children grow old?

 

anticipating the future -

out in the cold

 

how much can you have -

from all thats on offer?

 

how much do you wish -

that you had been softer?

 

how far do your emotions -

stretch to feel?

 

how quick will you be -

to admit this is real?

 

how strongly can you deny -

all these "goings on"?

 

how soft will the sentence be -

if i stood strong?

[yeawutever]

This poem rocks!!!!!!

[neva_black_n_white]

thanks x muchly appreictaed.

 

neva

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Yeah neva thats awesome

[Ms. Babydoll]

very inspiring and interesting

[Daddy Bear]

it really makes me think deeply about my own life. i think that's about the highest compliment i can pay to any poem.

[neva_black_n_white]

thankyou for the compliment then slightlybent, thats really quite special. interesting to know..

 

thanks girls i appreciated the responces

 

bit of an ongoing situations this one