neva_black_n_white Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 how much does this - have a hold over you? how hard is it - to watch your life be consumed? how long will it take - for you to understand that the course you have taken - holds out no hands? how hard is it to watch - your children grow old? anticipating the future - out in the cold how much can you have - from all thats on offer? how much do you wish - that you had been softer? how far do your emotions - stretch to feel? how quick will you be - to admit this is real? how strongly can you deny - all these "goings on"? how soft will the sentence be - if i stood strong? Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted August 28, 2006 Author Share Posted August 28, 2006 thanks x muchly appreictaed. neva Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 Yeah neva thats awesome Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted August 29, 2006 Share Posted August 29, 2006 very inspiring and interesting Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted August 29, 2006 Share Posted August 29, 2006 it really makes me think deeply about my own life. i think that's about the highest compliment i can pay to any poem. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted September 2, 2006 Author Share Posted September 2, 2006 thankyou for the compliment then slightlybent, thats really quite special. interesting to know.. thanks girls i appreciated the responces bit of an ongoing situations this one Link to comment
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