AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 11, 2006 Share Posted August 11, 2006 Heard your voice so many times before, Yet everytime i hear it, I cry a little more! Broken is how you left me, Just wishing for your touch, Wanting you to see, The person you hurt so very much. Daddy you are ment to love me, Ment to watch me grow, Your not ment to leave me, All alone, Having to put up a show. Your the course of my heartache, Your the one who makes me run, My soul you did take, My heart you did break. I want to feel you wipe away my tears, I want you to tell me how i've grown over the years. But i have to stop this hoping, Gotta give up on all the moping. Tonight i say goodbye, Once and fall all you'll watch me die! Link to comment
NKP Posted August 11, 2006 Share Posted August 11, 2006 I loved it, it made me get tears in my eyes, i could relate to it alot, my dad just left (suicde) it ripped me apart and 5 years later im still not okay. Great poem!!!! Link to comment
PRSOV Posted August 11, 2006 Share Posted August 11, 2006 Excellent poem, it's just such a sad subject to write about. I hope this poem helps you to control your emotions a little more. PR Link to comment
Moon Goddess Posted August 11, 2006 Share Posted August 11, 2006 I love it. It's always nice to see your poetry, This is one of your best ones yet. I know it's hard when a parent leaves and I feel for the people than can relate ( myself as well) Hope things get better for both of you. Stay Strong Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 13, 2006 Author Share Posted August 13, 2006 Thanks guys! Its broken me up for years its stupid how important one person can be! But i guess that just shows how much you love them.... Link to comment
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