Detox.

[EmptySoul]

Emotion

feels like panic

quick breaths

cigarette in hand

pacing the floor

but

being numb

was a killing drug-

and i'm not sure i want to die anymore.

 

I don't feel like this poem is really complete, or that it really explains what I was trying to get out, but here it is.

 

-E.

[Steven1607307306]

I think it's great. I suffered through addiction as well. Look for my poem "Twisted, Crooked" maybe it'll inspire some fresh thoughts. In my opinion, this poem is complete, but if you feel empty still, try adding a little more detail.