Goofy little poem

[BBHFutureAllAmerican]

this is a silly little poem i wrote about a girl that goes to a different school, a couple of the lines are stuff she says about me (in a joking manner of course) so it's kind of an indirect poem for her, hence the name, it's not my best work, but most of my other stuff is very personal so here goes.

 

For Her

 

I don't know your face

and you don't know mine

you don't know this

but I wish you were mine

I do know you don't feel the same

I guess I will always just be lame

I wish I was your special someone

you've got me wrapped around your thumb

Like you said

how could anyone hate you

I wonder if what I feel is true

You only wish I was that nerd

You say I am

I'm for real

I'm no loser deal

I may be blind

but you're always on my mind

When I say don't miss me

do you miss me?

Tell me you feel like this too

and if not I'll act like I never knew

 

open to any and all good or bad criticism

[SxcLady]

nicely expressed

[Daddy Bear]

worked for me. i kind of felt a little hip-hop or rapcore flow in it.

[itsallgrand]

I like it. Heartfelt, simple and sweet. Right on.