venus777 Posted March 15, 2006 Share Posted March 15, 2006 A woman with her eyes open is destined to live dismay She sees the monstrosity The lies that people live The deception people give She can not lie It scares them away She lives in the moment Of her feelings as they sway She will live her life Loving at a distance Her heart torn She is Alone Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted March 15, 2006 Share Posted March 15, 2006 Awww i really like that! Great job, it really hits hard nd i know what you mean! Link to comment
ShySoul Posted March 31, 2006 Share Posted March 31, 2006 That was nicely done Venus. But do you really think she's alone? Or do you think that having her eyes open she can see the way out and see into a better future? Link to comment
venus777 Posted April 3, 2006 Author Share Posted April 3, 2006 she is essentially alone and must accept it. Link to comment
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