Hot In the Crossfire (Anger of Mind)

[Rawk-1]

anger and rage

hate and sorrow

the state of betrayal

my mind is locked cage

I feel nothing,there is no peace

like a wild animal

a prisoner of mind attached to a leash

I can't think, there is no control

maddness sractches at my soul

focus,don't look back,never give up

my mind is spinning

my heart is under attack

they're after me

the world is against me

I'm lost and alone

my mind is my worst enemy,where is home

"hot in the crossfire"

I fight and run,yell and retaliate

I have overcome

today I face the world,tomorrow is won

 

 

Copyright ©2006 J.C

[ocrob]

Great poem bro. I have written a lot myself and I like the way you wrote it. I know there are different names for different styles, but your was very unique. You did not just rhyme every line or every two. It worked for me and I think it is really good.

[ShySoul]

Nice work.