neva_black_n_white Posted January 17, 2006 Share Posted January 17, 2006 Words of silence: these verses of silence where you seem to start like every words a mouth full - so it breaks your heart its like you try so hard to throw something out but the result is feeble and it cuts you down i can see the effort this force youve put in its like a battle of your emotions and you never do win i can see what you want i can see what youd say its just that its not heard so its just not okay i want to think - that these silent words are heard but what happens if im wrong? and the meanings are blured it seems to me that a voice must be spoken in order for both our hearts - not to be broken ...................................................................... still being worked on, doesnt entirely make sense neva Link to comment
darkblue Posted January 17, 2006 Share Posted January 17, 2006 It flows well. Excellent; as always Link to comment
ShySoul Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 Bravo. As db said, excellent as always. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted January 18, 2006 Author Share Posted January 18, 2006 Chuckles. I hopes you two dont think well be setting up loads of threads hehe.. slowly slides onto her other little convo with you two! Muchly appreciated! Kell Link to comment
Ålter Ego Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 Very beautiful. I like it a lot I do. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted January 23, 2006 Author Share Posted January 23, 2006 Thanks guys! Its really appreciated *blushes* neva Link to comment
Shadows Light Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 very nice.. thanks. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted January 23, 2006 Author Share Posted January 23, 2006 chuckles. what a random responce. thanks to you too *smiles* neva Link to comment
Shadows Light Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 LOL.. what I meant is.. thanks.. it did make me stop to pause... Reminds me of ... having a tumble of stufffffff wanting to come out of me and... words just fail me. i can't breathe much less... put two coherrant words together.. lol.... Link to comment
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