Outcast-Angel Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Sweet Suicide of the Heart by outcast-angel The blood flows. My blood, raining down feeding the earth, feeding your hunger My essense, tipped down your throat, drained my heart mangled and discarded But i still run to catch up, still can't let you go it's just another case of sweet suicide of reason. It's like tearing myself in two, at odds with myself; worse, at odds with you Forgive me, i never meant to hurt so much, I'm sorry, i didn't mean to bleed I never meant to fall back to the sweet suicide of the soul When i can't find myself and you're the only one left in the light How can i but reach for you, cry out to you beg you to lift me close, clutch me tight How can i but plead to feel you on me again let your hands cover old scars with new When i see those scars, your signature how can i not Remember How can i not embrace a sweet suicide of the heart? Link to comment
Moon Goddess Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Wow that is full of alot of emotion I love it keep posting I love all your poems and to many I relate Link to comment
Hidden Royalty Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 The emotion has found its thought and the thought has found the words... Very well written! Link to comment
Outcast-Angel Posted January 6, 2006 Author Share Posted January 6, 2006 ^_^ thank you both, very much! Link to comment
ShySoul Posted January 7, 2006 Share Posted January 7, 2006 Chills. Your writing gives me chills. I love it. Link to comment
Outcast-Angel Posted January 8, 2006 Author Share Posted January 8, 2006 Chills. Your writing gives me chills. I love it. your comments are always a pleasure to read, shysoul. but you are inflating my ego Link to comment
Steven1607307306 Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 Great and effective way to channel your feelings. I love it, I can relate to a majority of this poem. Link to comment
Outcast-Angel Posted January 11, 2006 Author Share Posted January 11, 2006 Great and effective way to channel your feelings. I love it, I can relate to a majority of this poem. oh, hun, i really hope that no one really can relate to this poem.. it's about an ex of mine. very bad relationship, and i wouldn't wish one like it on anyone. but.. i suppose that if it applies to something else in your life, that's.. not exactly good either. unless it gives some sort of comfort or something. i am glad that you like it though. oh, look at me babble. ciao! ~O.A. Link to comment
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