Cuu Posted July 11, 2003 Share Posted July 11, 2003 i feel like typing retarded things too. not a poet..go easy on me My heart is forever torn Now that we are apart My hate grows deeper Every minute that we've lost I struggle to survive, cause it's just that hard My alcohol tolerance rises And it all made sense I see the dark clouds Looming over my head I slit my wrists And lay me down to bed I cry, and now I'm at rest Link to comment
pimpcess Posted July 11, 2003 Share Posted July 11, 2003 I keep saying to all these aspiring poets (not that im a pro but its just what I feel) that poetry doesn't have to rhyme or even make sense to be good, it just has to come from the heart, as urs did, it was good 'Poetry without soul is a tree with no leaves''. Keep writing. Practise makes perfect. Link to comment
Cuu Posted July 11, 2003 Author Share Posted July 11, 2003 haha thank you pimpcess. I'll get better one day. Recommend any good books? Link to comment
pimpcess Posted July 11, 2003 Share Posted July 11, 2003 Books??? Ooh I dunno, I'll have a look and get back to u... hey in the meantime u could always read my poems there floatin around the place somewhere... Stay active, Keep writin... Link to comment
Cuu Posted July 11, 2003 Author Share Posted July 11, 2003 i've read all your poems. you're like the poetic queen on this forum. well, goodnight. i gotta get up in 4 hours. I'm feeling better about myself and I hope everyone out there can feel the same way. Link to comment
CoolGuy Posted July 11, 2003 Share Posted July 11, 2003 I have met a new fren ..hello cuu glad to know that u r afflicted by love too!! being apart from u r lover is difficult for sure this thing is one malady for which there is no cure. i am sure the cloud will clear and the sun will shine u r lover will soon come back to u and say "dear u r mine" that day will soon come and thats my view sorry i talked about this and u better not sue!!!!!!!!!!!! hi, cuu....nice to meet a fren who likes writing poems too..(i am a damn amateur though)..... keep posting ....and keep in touch Bye, CoolGuy Link to comment
Cuu Posted July 11, 2003 Author Share Posted July 11, 2003 hello coolguy, what is new? i am afflicted by love and it looks like you are too!! being apart is tough and i know i can get through! there is a cure and it's knowing people like you!! the sun is shining and i am willing to embrace when my lover comes back i will listen to what she has to say life goes on and that is my new view depends on how big your bank account, then maybe i'll sue!! Link to comment
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