pimpcess Posted July 11, 2003 Share Posted July 11, 2003 World famous superstar, Cash, looks and fame, Everybody in the world, Knew this mans name, He had everything he'd ever dreamed of, But just one regret, One lady, his first love, She was to hard to forget. This woman would've cried for him, Died for him, lied for him, Would've always always tried for him, He did things for her he thought he never ever would, He felt things for her he thought he never ever could, He wanted her to have his kids, and be his wife, This lady had left a permanent mark in his life, He was so stupid, Letting her slip through her fingers, And now this constant pain inside him just lingers, He'd learnt a lesson, never let something special go, He loved this lady more than any1 could know, All these other women, no-one came close, This was the lady he would love the most, He now knew not to take advantage of what you've got, Hold it tight, no matter what, He never thought someone could make him feel like this, Every day he'd sit and reminise, He'd do anything just for 1 last kiss, This was the girl he would always always miss. Link to comment
J_Rocc Posted July 11, 2003 Share Posted July 11, 2003 wow another one from the one and only. all your poems seems to have a significance to what i went and what i am going through. well done. Link to comment
pimpcess Posted July 11, 2003 Author Share Posted July 11, 2003 Thankyou Im real glad, I try just to write poems that are relatable. I dunno if thats a word or not but hey. Thanx. Link to comment
keleah Posted July 11, 2003 Share Posted July 11, 2003 I'd give anything for my last kiss, but he's gone forever. Definetely relatable. Link to comment
Babes Posted July 11, 2003 Share Posted July 11, 2003 Beautiful!! Keep up the good work Link to comment
taken Posted July 11, 2003 Share Posted July 11, 2003 like i've said before you have definite talent. keep up the writing. you never cease to surprise me with your writing. oh bty>>i sent you some of my poetry. tell me what you think. Link to comment
CoolGuy Posted July 11, 2003 Share Posted July 11, 2003 There is one word for that man - sorry I dont want to end up like that and thats my - worry. Love is the most precious thing u can find for which u cannot pay in cash or kind though such a thing he did find he did not make the effort to make strong the bind! love ripens when the two partners understand and share else it would be like a desert barren and bare.... For all ye people out there who have found love those who know what it is love and be loved understand it is a gift sent by the almighty above a gift so priceless ......a gift called LOVE. Bye, CoolGuy Link to comment
pimpcess Posted July 21, 2003 Author Share Posted July 21, 2003 Wow good latch on 2 mine cool! Link to comment
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