I think Im gonna give this to him.

[QTpie87]

So I took the last two poems I've wrote about my ex and weaved and added some into eachother to make one poem that says everything I feel, and how much I love him. sense im not the best at face to face convo when it comes to love I thought maybe it would be a good idea to give this to him. But first I wanted some opinions on it to make sure im not giving him a stupid poem. and I also want to know if this is a bad idea. please read opinions needed.

 

RAG DOLL HEARTS-----

 

As we sit on your bed and listen to Blink 182

you sware these songs were written for you.

You must not know how much I care, how much it hurts when you act like im not there.

 

You had your heart ripped from your life.

She tossed you out like a broken useless toy.

Losing love, a curse.....she didn't see how much your love is worth.

I hope someday you forget her, all the pain she caused.

Or take it as a lesson, let it open up your eyes.

Forget her for a moment and realize im here.

 

I'll give you time, I hope you'll change your mind.

I'll keep my head up with a fake smile on my face, but i'll be missing you anyway.

I'll dry my own tears, and bide my time.

let me keep my dreams and call them mine.

Please don't tell me you're sorry, or how you really care.

 

I can't be your torn rag doll.

You ripped out my stitches.....I'll still stand tall.

You mended my broken soul with your soft embrace.

Nothing feels better than when you touch my face.

Don't you see? Those songs were written for me!!

 

I started to fall in love.

I opened up and let myself trust.

I tried to be there and did my best.

Cant you understand???

there's nothing I can do.........I love you.

[ShySoul]

I don't think its a bad idea or a stupid poem. It comes from your heart and is something you need to do for your own peace of mind. I've said before how I think you should be cautious and careful, not let the same things that got in the way before happen again or just get together cause you feel lonely without him. But do give him the poem. If he wants to change and you believe him, see what happens. Or maybe giving it to him will help you deal with your feelings and make it easier to move on if he doesn't want to change.