brave Posted June 21, 2003 Share Posted June 21, 2003 They had been together for many a year, Now, all she could feel was fear. She gave all that she could give, It just wasn't the way she wanted to live. He left without a backward glance, Not even giving their love a chance. She often wonders what she could have done, To keep him from going on the run. Now she is living all alone, With nothing to call her own. She can barely make herself eat, Wondering if her life will ever again be complete. This woman is now moving along, Building her courage, and becoming strong. Time will heel her broken pride, Toward the sunset her heart will glide. Link to comment
TraneX007 Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 ??? ??? That is the worst poem on the face of the earth. No question. Why don't you try something else besides two line rhyming? Link to comment
calibabe007 Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 WTF is your problem, I liked it, cause it had nice rythm and it kinda goes with what is going on in my life! Loved it!!! Calibabe007 Link to comment
Rhonda Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 that was great...who cares that it rhymes??!! ...I feel what you are feeling...thanks for sharing Link to comment
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