What He's Done For Me

[brave]

What He's Done For Me

 

For so long I've been lonely

Drowning in my tears,

No one there to listen

Or help me face my deepest fears.

No one there to shelter me

From this world so full of pain,

No one showed me rainbows

Every time I saw the rain.

 

No one there to give a damn

About my broken heart,

No one to pick up the pieces

Every time I fell apart.

But, finally someone came along

And took the time to know,

All the hurt and pain

That I tried hard not to show.

 

He took the time to realize

How much I've had to pay,

For every time I gave of me

There was something taken away.

He took the time to look inside

This heart as cold as stone,

He found that there was something there

No one else has ever known.

 

He found what I'd been hiding there

Brought it out to show the world,

That there was so much love inside

Of such a lonely girl.

He knew what I was feeling

So he set my mind at ease,

Then he did the impossible -

He gave my soul to me.

 

So, now I'm going to take this time

To say "Thanks" for all he's done,

And hope he knows I love him more

Then life or anyone.

[Jitrenda]

Wow...beautiful...and heart wrenching.

 

It's really good. You really can feel the emotion you pour into it. We have some very talented poets here.

 

beautiful poem, hon!

[BananaRamma01]

I, like you, pour my soul into every piece I write, and it lets other people know who you really are... keep up the good work, you are very talented, and I hope to see more from you soon!

Always,

BananaRamma01