Venting! Found out he's not sitting home relaxing while we sit here

[Ms Darcy]

I'm going to guess English is not your first language. That might be some of the confusion is reading this. You half start thoughts but don't paint a picture. That's ok.

 

I'd make a suggestion that you might want to consider having a private journal if you aren't necessarily looking for feedback.

[Quidam]

This is a novel orgy ... Ill go with the rest make a journal you are so on the defensive and don't really seek feedback