LikeWater Posted February 1, 2013 Share Posted February 1, 2013 You're the sun that only sets No, I've never seen you rise You're the face that only smiles No, I've never seen you cry You're the tide that only comes in No, I've never seen you go out You're the voice that only whispers No, I've never heard you shout You're the cloud that only swells No, I've never seen you rain You're the fighter that only wins No, I've never seen you train You're the fire that only burns No, I've never felt your warmth You're the bee flies alone No, you're never in a swarm You're the flower that only grows No, I've never seen you wither You're the one who runs away While I beg you to come hither You're the dream that's always vague No, I've never seen you clearly You're the one that left me behind Yet I still love you so dearly Link to comment
chai714 Posted February 1, 2013 Share Posted February 1, 2013 Pretty impressive. I'm no expert in poetry but that's well thought-out. Link to comment
LikeWater Posted February 1, 2013 Author Share Posted February 1, 2013 Wow, thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you liked it Link to comment
LikeWater Posted February 7, 2013 Author Share Posted February 7, 2013 Thank you. Glad you liked it Link to comment
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