Lost Love

[landclark]

He filled her heart

He filled her head

He left a dream

 

But she awoke

To find emptiness

To find pain

 

She left him

She left before she was left

She found solace in the emptiness

 

Now she feels nothing

Now she sees nothing

Now she wants nothing

 

Nothing is safe

Nothing is sane

Nothing is filling

 

How does she open her heart?

How does she feel again?

How does she forgive?

 

She copes

She gets by

She finds a way…….

[kungfumaster]

Nice poem Ms. landclark.

 

I like the last line.

[Gauchori]

Good good. Keep on and work to get even better!

(We all need some little push)

[Fill]

Great poem landclark.

 

Just like kungfumaster said, I really like the last line. I hope to one day to cope with my loss, get by, and find a way... =D

[lunatic]

Hey Landclark,

 

I just wanted to tell you to hang in there because things will get better. Plus I liked your poem simple and to the point.

 

I really liked the last three lines too!

 

Keep up the good work!

 

 

Hubman 8)

[i_hate_the_world47]

well,that was a very well written poem.i hope to see more of your work on enotalone in te future.

 

~Meagan~

[under_the_pressure]

I really like that poem. It was great, and as most replies said, I really like the last lines/stanza best. Hope to see more!

 

under*

[EmptySoul]

Hey. I liked it. My favorite part was:

 

She found solace in the emptiness

 

Now she feels nothing

Now she sees nothing

Now she wants nothing

 

Nothing is safe

Nothing is sane

Nothing is filling

 

I can relate to those stanzas. Thanks.

 

Empty