i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 31, 2004 Share Posted August 31, 2004 Bitter sweet Love A warm embrace From loving arms Making me feel loved Like I was meant to be in this world A bitter sweet kiss From ever loving lips I am floating on cloud 9 In never ending bliss Those three words Make the world seem right They say so much Yet at the same time nothing at all A dark soul turned to light A smile to a frown You lifted me up When I was so down I welcome you to my life And if you think you can cope Then stay and love me Till the end of time Hey guys,this isnt one of my better poems,but it is uplifiting.A nice change to my others.Hope you enjoy. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
kungfumaster Posted August 31, 2004 Share Posted August 31, 2004 Wow - Meagan - you are a true talent. If that's one of your "not so better ones", I can't wait 'til your better ones. Just superb. Excellent. Inspiring. Keep on writing! Kung fu Link to comment
mtastic Posted August 31, 2004 Share Posted August 31, 2004 I agree with Kung Fu, Great poem, especially for a "not one of your better ones" keep up the good work, mtastic Link to comment
Giarc Posted August 31, 2004 Share Posted August 31, 2004 That is such an amazing poem. i_hate_the_world47 I honestly have to say that you are an amazing poet. I also like your signature. It is so well written, and just amazing as well. Keep posting! Link to comment
hardcore Posted September 1, 2004 Share Posted September 1, 2004 i think you should take what every one tells you about it and throw it away yes it was great but did it come from inside is this the true way you feel i am but a blade of grass i will bend in the wind but i will not breck . meening that you should never take what pepole tell you to heart . wrigth about how you feel who care's if they like it it's not ment for them to understand anyways . case you haven't noticed i was rejected . kick out of the contest lol said i was to raw so i told them to go ***** off lol. but yes i did love this one as well you are really good but never lose your center thats where it comes from . 8) your buddy hardcore lol Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 2, 2004 Author Share Posted September 2, 2004 well hardcore,yes that was how i feel.and i am not going to throw it away. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
hardcore Posted September 6, 2004 Share Posted September 6, 2004 sorry sdear hope your not mad at me i just thougth that you where tring to conform to what other pepole wanted you to be i was just tring to say . keep it real lol hope this sheads some ligth on the subject im not that smart as you migth know lol. so i hope that you may for give me angel. Link to comment
SHaTTeReDSouL Posted September 6, 2004 Share Posted September 6, 2004 wow, you're so good at writing...great job, keep up the good work! Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 7, 2004 Author Share Posted September 7, 2004 thanx everyone for the comments.I really appreciate them ~Meagan~~ Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 very good poem... hugs, under* Link to comment
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