i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 HELP!poem her fears they haunt her,late at night,waking her from her wondrous slumber,the only place in which she can feel real is in her dreams at night,for everyday brings more hardships,each day they get harder to handle,until she finally blows,cutting through her pain,bleeding black,letting her soul drip upon the floor,like a slow moving stream,her tears they form a river,flowing from her eyes,her blackened eyes,the eyes that used to hold and answer,but know they only hold the lies,the darkest lies that were ever told,now as she slices away her life,she just whispers one word this sounds like a whisper it isnt,it is a silent scream,a cry from the depths of what is left of this young girls soul,so she sits,waits,bleeds,cries,hoping someone hears the very word that may save her Hope you all like. ~meagan~ Link to comment
Stinkweed Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 It's really good. It really amazed me. It's full of deep emotions that we all go through when we suffer... Great job =D> Link to comment
unforgiven Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 truly great i loved it i could feel your anger in this one. Link to comment
unforgiven Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 me and dead-eye's must be nabbers lol' hello nabor. lol unforgiven Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 28, 2004 Author Share Posted August 28, 2004 Thaxn guys. ~meagan~ Link to comment
mtastic Posted August 28, 2004 Share Posted August 28, 2004 I like it. Very well written. You are an excellent poet. Keep it up! mtastic Link to comment
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