i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 The Darkness Darkness pulls me through its icy cold door way Its doorway to hell,i know this place all to well For i have lived here for fourteen long years Waiting for someone to release me Release my mind, body, and soul Take away my pain,take away my fears I cry crimson tears,i bleed mascara My face darkens from the pain i endure Day in and day out,night and day The blade is my only surrender,my only way out,my only escape from the hell hole i live in I breath blood ,think blood,it runs my life Day in and day out,night and day I live not in a world,i live in a shadow A shadow of fate,a shadow of death,a shadow that lasts a lifetime You ask me the difference between life and hell I tell you there isnt one,i live both everyday My sham of a life and my hell of a life Then darkness loosens it grip Shoves me back through the door It doesnt want me,no one wants me I am a depressed nothing A mistake on gods green earth Yet i continue my life Day in and day out,night and day Hey guys i know this poem isnt all that good,but its my feelings.Hope you like it. ~meagan~ (Black Rose) Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 good poem, your an awesome writer Link to comment
hardcore Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 hello there this is me hardcore . i just want to say this is a turely good no no great poem . you know me and i'll only tell you the truth . by far some of your best work. :scramble: Link to comment
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