This is about you

[ang3l2004]

I feel this again I feel your touch,

I hear your whisper and love you so much.

 

I want you next to me night and day,

My heart is yours what else can I say.

 

I want to hold you all through the night,

I want you to be here I want you in sight.

 

I want you to know that I still care,

Give you all the love that I can share.

 

No more crying because you are not here,

Now I know that I want you near.

 

I know it may be over and done for good,

But I must tell you how I feel I know I should.

 

I still see you in my future as bright as a star,

I still hope and pray you wont go to far.

 

So listen to me when I tell you how I feel,

Since day one I cant help it this has always been real.

 

By me tell me what you think

[i_hate_the_world47]

You have such beautiful poetry.You also have a way with words.

Meagan

[goddess23]

i feel as if youve taken the words right out of my heart about my last love who moved. it really is beautiful. it sounds good and it has so much true feeling. it really is good, you should write song lyrics lol.

[lunatic]

Ang3l I have been saying this for a while now. You are talented and should submit your poetry into a site for contest or publication. Keep up the awesome work you have such a wonderful way with words.

 

Hubman 8)

[HaloDestroyer]

Hi!

 

This is a beautiful poem, no doubt about that.

 

Take Hubman's advice. There's a site called Dogma Publications out there, who produce works from people like us.

 

They don't pay, but they sure get your name known. I got Haiku published recently.....

 

XxX-Ben-xXx

[ang3l2004]

hey thankyou all so much thanks for the advice!!!I hope you like

[lamode]

omg ... i love you ang3l2004, u always makes good works.

[ForAnother]

I liked your other one a bit more, however I loved your last two lines. In fact they make your poem

 

ForAnother

[fallingisfun]

I like the last two lines also.