Skoople88 Posted July 29, 2010 Share Posted July 29, 2010 These patterns of little value scream for attention They'll go unheard and through the windows life will play in gray scale I remember the vibrant days when we were walking the spectrum together Shy and without a voice, I learned to speak much to late Talking to stars and begging for signs Wishing we could go back in time Ever dreaming of waking With you the only one I see But the morning is so discouraging Spending days in bed with no regard for progress Beyond these sheets is nothing of interest It's all come and gone Every opportunity, every chance Lost by little more than a nervous stance Our friends backyard in fall left much to be said When you asked what I was thinking I swear my heart was already sinking That fountain was so far from the truth Why didn't I say my thoughts were about you Five years have gone Still I remember like it were yesterday Your smile in that endearing way You etched a place in my heart And it's here to stay Left to memory I hope you can recall me And not a featureless blur With no Identity Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 2, 2010 Share Posted September 2, 2010 I like the transition throughout this, and the obvious longing. Like you've let yourself be vunerable through writing even though you couldn't through speach. Beautiful Link to comment
Skoople88 Posted September 8, 2010 Author Share Posted September 8, 2010 aww thank you Link to comment
kikii Posted February 13, 2011 Share Posted February 13, 2011 LOVE. fellow poet, you have amazing talent. I kept reading this over and over, finding new meaning each time. FANTASTIC. Link to comment
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