Rage Posted June 7, 2004 Share Posted June 7, 2004 Love doesn't live here anymore It left when you walked out the door I should have known it would come to this I could taste your poison in your kiss From me you took love away When all I wanted was love to stay I'd smile at the thought of you For our love my heart stayed true But love doesn't live here no longer Against this pain I thought I was stronger It has moved on elsewhere To fool another heart to care Though love never said Goodbye I can tell it's gone by these tears I cry Every tear my eye drops Is a reminder of why my heart has stopped Stopped feeling and loving No more joy or caring All because my last true fear..... No Longer Does Love Live Here. Link to comment
woobiegirl Posted June 7, 2004 Share Posted June 7, 2004 I can tell it was written from the heart..., thanks for sharing! Although sad, it's very well expressed...and I hope "Love" comes knocking at your door again soon!!!! Take care, Woobiegirl Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 That was a very good poem Rage. It has moved on elsewhere To fool another heart to care I really enjoyed that part of it! It speaks to me in a way. Keep writing. ~Under~ Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 i think it's great. EmptySoul Link to comment
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