I Feel Emptiness

[bubbles]

I feel so empty

My mind keeps

wandering

I can't concentrate

I want to

feel your closeness

I want to

hear your thoughts

I want to

touch your soul

But instead

we are apart

and my mind keeps

wandering

thinking about

how much I miss you

I feel so empty

My mind keeps wandering

to the times when

I was with you

I miss you so much

I love you

I always will

miss and love you

I will never understand

the hurt I was given

[Happy_Go_Lucky_Heb]

Hmm sounds like a breakup you're not over yet. It's a pretty ok poem I guess. Interesting nevertheless. Hope you get better soon!

 

Heb

[neva_black_n_white]

ive had that feeling before, im assuming its a loss of a relationship that was beyond your own control. at least that what it seems to be, its as if you had no input or was deffesless to the outcome.

i liked your poem it showed great amounts of emotions, im asuming this is literal, so how are you at the minute?

 

kel

[SLBG]

Thanks bubbles,

 

I also feel so empty, my heart is full of pain.

 

slbg

[EmptySoul]

thanks bubbles, i relate to your poem and i liked it.

EmptySoul