hodgo Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 You are the reason for every beat of my heart I will love you forever You are the reason for my every breath The first time we kissed swept me off my feet You are the reason for my every thought Reminiscing on our memories You are the reason for my every smile When you told me after every phone call that you loved me You are the reason for my every dream The thought of you drives me wild You are never far away I can just look up and see your eyes in the stars You are the inspiration for everything I write I cannot imagine a life without you You are the reason why I'm waiting Because I know that you are worth every agonising minute You are the reason for my every tear I regret hurting you so You are the reason I hold on Because you are the most amazing person I will ever know. 1 Link to comment
SapphireNoir10 Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 That is beautiful. Thank you for sharing that. Link to comment
pace of ace Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 That's beautiful. Did you write that yourself? Link to comment
My Advice Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 It sounds coe-dependent but the lyrics are well done. Link to comment
pace of ace Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 Also sounds like it's for a lost love, which makes it even more poignant. Link to comment
agburns84 Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 Another beautiful effort there, Hodgo, you are truly brilliant! Link to comment
hodgo Posted January 22, 2009 Author Share Posted January 22, 2009 wow thanks for the responses guys i only just put it up! yeah i did write it myself. and it is actually for a specific someone so i guess thats why it was ..not easy to write but why it came out so well i think. there's a long story behind it. take a look if u want at 250104[/url] thanks again. Link to comment
pace of ace Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Wow, i just read it. I'm not sure i've read anything more tragic yet optimistic on this or any other site like it. I really admire your courage. I feel the same way about love you know. I've only ever been in true love once, i still am, and i know she'll be in my heart forever, but it's out of my control...but that's another story. Have you sent him your poem? If i received something like that, it would make my day. Link to comment
My Advice Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 wow thanks for the responses guys i only just put it up! yeah i did write it myself. and it is actually for a specific someone so i guess thats why it was ..not easy to write but why it came out so well i think. there's a long story behind it. take a look if u want at 250104[/url] thanks again. hmm sad story. Link to comment
agburns84 Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Just try to keep the dream alive however you can, I hope everything comes true for you, you very much deserve for that to happen! Link to comment
bellamarley Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL it made me think of the man I love. Link to comment
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