Curtain Call

[Beoslasher]

This weeks been so stressful plz enjoy the poem, its been therapeutic. but im still hurtin

 

 

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The die is cast

the news is in

I cant have you

cant live like this

 

my heart contracts

my head explodes

the tears fall down

into concrete below

 

a sigh escapes

my bittered heart

so full of love

when ur so full of doubt

 

the leaves they fall

and start to change

your heart will die

its always the same

 

I justify that thinking of you

will let me heal in time

but I realize that were on different paths

that will never meet, aligned

 

the seasons come

and then they go

loves they fade

and some will grow

 

but as, I draw my hood,

the autumn comes

I wish you could come

I wish you could come.

[mellybelly]

I love this.

 

The last line is like it came straight from my soul.

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Im sorry you are feeling so down at the moment.

 

But pain does create the best poetry if you ask me, if beautiful and so sad, conveys how you feel wonderfully.

 

I hope this week brings more hope and happiness then last week did.

[littlestar]

nice! i like it!

[Beoslasher]

Im sorry you are feeling so down at the moment.

 

But pain does create the best poetry if you ask me, if beautiful and so sad, conveys how you feel wonderfully.

 

I hope this week brings more hope and happiness then last week did.

 

Eh next week is looking grim, but we'll see what happens. Your right though, Pain really does create the most beautiful poetry; its so terrible but beautiful at the same time

 

Thanks for the props every1!

[redrose85]

I like this a lot! Good job Miles

 

I'm sorry that love is kind of kicking you in the butt right now

[butterfly07]

I like this poem, really good job!

lots of emotion and its real